I love writing stories, although I mostly keep them to myself, so decided to put a part of one on here. To see what people thought, I let my sisters read them, but they aren't much help since they all agree they are wonderful.
Aaron gave a sigh, he knew he was going to hate it in Tarmin. Aaron was the only son of King Justin the X, this summer his Uncle requested that Aaron spend a fortnight with him. Aaron liked his Uncle Jessrel, he was just like Father, but things were so different in Tarmin, different customs different rules. But the main reason Aaron knew he was going to hate it here was because of his cousins Judien and Hannah Elizabeth. Judien was only three months younger than Aaron, but what he lacked in age and height he made up for in brutality and meanness. Hannah Elizabeth was twelve and half and was becoming just like her mother thinking only of parties and dresses, which disgusted Aaron. Without noticing it Aaron had been walking towards
the town arena, he stopped right in front off it. Peering into the immense structure Aaron noticed a figure practicing with a sword, curious Aaron decided to see who it was. It was a man, at least that is what Aaron thought it was, tall and slender wearing all white, he had deep intense blue eyes. Again without noticing, Aaron drew his own sword and held in his right hand. Then Clang,
Aaron found himself face to face with the white figure and he realized with a gasp he was really a she. He looked into to her eyes and seemed to see her soul, Aaron could great hurt and anger in her eyes and something else, something he couldn't describe. Pulling away he looked more closely at her, she was slender but strong to, stronger than any girl he knew, she was also proud he could tell that from the way she stood. Not the haughty tipe of proud that says ''I'm better than you are, but the proud she used to cover up something. Aaron knew that someone or something had hurt this girl, deeply. ''Who are you?'' she voice was like steel.
''My name is Aaron'' he stopped from mentioning that he Prince Aaron the III, he wanted to know this girl and he wanted her to know him as, well just Aaron not Prince.
She relaxed a little she moved away and looked at him critical. "And you what is your name?" Aaron asked.
"My name?" she got a lost far away look in her eyes "My name is Eirth"
I would love comments on this! Suggestions are most welcome. I don't really like the title so if anyone has suggestions on that I would love hear about it.